today we worked on our essays.emily and i read over mine and made corrections together,we also went over any questions i had about corrections on my last draft.then we had a lesson on “to be” and to avoid it to make our writing stronger.we had a code red drill so that kind of cut out of some of our class time.
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i’m really happy with how my paper is turning out.i’m going to work on the corrections that emily gave me and that you gave me for my final and hopefully it will be even better. plus i participated in today’s lesson on “to be”.
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